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After losing five straight road games out west, the Minnesota Wild find themselves in a deep hole. For the season, they are 1-6. They now are experiencing difficulty selling tickets for the first time in franchise history. However, the Wild are adjusting to a new coach, new players, and new philosophys. The entire franchise is hopeful they will get better as the season continues.
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This is a sad story. I knew they were doing terrible when I heard that they are the worst team in the NHL this year. Yes, they are experiencing a lot of changes, but I thought this new coach would do better than Lemaire, not worse. I sure do hope they get better. They just traded for a new player. I like your lead. The "deep hole" is really attention-grabbing. Thank you for leaving the reader on a hopeful note.
ReplyDeleteI hope that they do decent in this transition year, maybe things with start working better for the team
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ReplyDeleteMistakes:
• Should be philosophies
• The team is singular, not plural. Therefore you should refer to "it" not "their"